Chapter 1 - Meeting - Page 6
Chinchikurin on July 15, 2007
Yes still, I know, nothing very exciting but its starting to get into the main swing of things! - Yay drawing a shy Koen XD Yuli will be here soon, i promise :3
I hope you enjoy what little this page offers, and i'll have the next one to you soon (between a week or a couple days) ^^ Keep reading! As usual, your thoughts and crit is appreciated ^^
( also, very, very sorry about the building, i know it sucks >< )
Fitz at 2:30AM, July 17, 2007
Hm I think the main building doesn't look... ominous enough, both in itself and with those puffy clouds around it. I realize You have Your own concept for architecture in this story, but I think it needs to look bigger and more overwhelming. So I'd suggest either something that looks like the WTC, with zillions of windows, or a panel in which the building is towering over the characters so they're the size of ants. Otherwise, still a great job. I really like Your shading.
Rusty Knight at 7:41PM, July 16, 2007
So far so good! V See? You've got fans already! V
deepcheese at 4:35PM, July 16, 2007
nice comic, I love your shadeing!