Chapter 1 - Meeting - Page 7
Chinchikurin on July 16, 2007
This is probably one of my best ones yet (i think). The 3rd panel - Elone is supposed to look a little goofy - again, i mucked the angle a little - she's supposed to be looking up.
I'm having some problems with side/diagonal angles for the eyes and mouth…hopefully i'll get it right eventually ^^
Crit and tips are, as always, are appreciated ^^
Jonko at 4:47AM, July 17, 2007
i'm in love with your style! totally faved!!!
Fitz at 2:59AM, July 17, 2007
Yup, this page looks good. You convey the claustrophobic feeling quite well, especially with the first pannel and the repeating clipping sound. Nice internal monologue, too. Gets more interesting.