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zero_kury on Sept. 26, 2007
Ok. My drawing style is not getting any simpler, but the other way around. That's bad considering the whole point of making this comic was to try to find a style simple enough for not having to spend more than 2 hours per page.
By the way, sorry for the crapy dialogues. i know some times what the characters say seems a little off. Or the camera angles and the pacing don't go well. i notice it when i read the whole thing. i'm a horrible writer, what am i supposed to do? you can be honest.
zero_kury at 1:44PM, Sept. 27, 2007
thanks a lot for your critics Shao. i really appreciate them. i'm always expecting them to get the best benefit out of them. They make complete sense to me. But one of the things i'm not willing to change, is the way i'm not scripting my comic. i'm just scripting one page ahead tops, some times, but most of it, i'm simply improvising everything when i sit to draw. And i enjoy doing so, for i can be a reader of my own comic and get surprised at the twists, like the others. that's the whole fun to me. i've tried scripting a whole comic before, and i end up quitting it shorty after i start cause i know the the whole story and i get bored. So probably i should improve the flow of my comic without stopping improvising. Yes, collaboration is something i considered doing a lot of times, and maybe it's the best idea, considering how crappy writer i am. Then again, thanks for your critics, they'll always be welcome and valued.
Shao at 1:19PM, Sept. 27, 2007
i really enjoy the middle two panels. they remind me of the hullk and i always thought that guy was funny when his clothes kind of just flew off.. xD i think, to fix your 'problem' (in my opinion, it's all REALLY good) is to script everything out before your draw. that way, it'll flow with your story the way you'd like it to. and if you wanted to change something, you can always alter JUST the script since it precedes the actual page. and always remember, some comic pages are meant to be boring of lacking so the story can lead up to something spectacular. to lessen the work load for each page, you can always just put a few panels on them, instead of 6 or whatever. ALSO! if you really don't want to write, you can collaborate with someone else, giving them the description of your story and main idea. but that was just advice from a noooooob. so if nothing i just said didn't appeal to you, that's okay i won't take it to heart. btw, i LOVE this comic.