BlitzBoy at 8:35AM, Nov. 28, 2006

Thanks Magnus, i appreciate your suggestions, i to hope i can achieve my full pontential. :)

magnus911 at 4:26PM, Nov. 27, 2006

I PQ'd you suggestions. You have potential, all you have to do is brush up on the quality, and you might draw in up to 100 readers daily.

BlitzBoy at 8:53AM, Nov. 27, 2006

Now i need a hug >.< Sorry guys, its my first one and i don't know about altering sprites and all that. From more advanced comic makers such as yourselves, do you think i should learnmore about editing chracters and remake this comic?

Mega Josh at 9:05PM, Nov. 26, 2006

[quote=BlitzBoy]I rate my own page a 2 aswell. 0_0[/quote] You can't actually rate yourself. The comic itself could be better. The bottom credit thing is something you don't need to do. If there are tails connected to the word bubbles and they're pointing to who's talking, you don't need to put who's talking in front of the speech and the grammar could be improved.

magnus911 at 1:53PM, Nov. 26, 2006

It's okay, but I don't like the fact that you made Lloyd and Presea into Densuke and Genesis without altering their sprites at all. People might think that Lloyd and Presea are traveling with Blitz instead of Densuke and Genesis. Punctuation could be improved.

soonmme at 11:14AM, Nov. 26, 2006

@blitz: yes, when I saw the tittle I thaught this was drawn, sorry I meant to rate a 3 :p

BlitzBoy at 11:09AM, Nov. 26, 2006

I rate my own page a 2 aswell. 0_0

BlitzBoy at 11:08AM, Nov. 26, 2006

Note: Updating tommorow.

BlitzBoy at 10:28AM, Nov. 26, 2006

K i did. But before i go, wasen't it a bit obvious that it is a sprite comic? Im using sprites.....

soonmme at 9:54AM, Nov. 26, 2006

This is a sprite comic. label it as so.