OMG, YURI FILLER!
Shiori Tsumi on Oct. 13, 2006
I know what you're thinking. WHAT THE HELL, SHIORI? YOU WERE GIVEN A WEEK AND ALL YOU CAME UP WITH FOR THE COMIC WAS A WEIRD YURI PICTURE?! And regretfully, the answer is yes. I have been busy with my high school play, and have had little time to do a new strip. So, sorry, all you get this week is a picture of two girls kissing. Sadly, I'm not sure if you'll get a comic next week, either. The play will still be going on, and I've got tons of classwork to catch up with as well, not to mention the fatigue brought on by it all, including the cold I've seem to of caught. So…if you just get a filler next week rather than a comic, you will know why.
What? Yeah, the one in the green shirt is a girl.
Nigellashade at 11:38AM, Oct. 21, 2006
It's a pleasure to meet your brother Shiori, It's nice to have met you Kazuo, I to play a bit of video games.. (Yeah even at my age)..^^; Here's to the both of you, hope you two have a good day! ~M~ v~~~~~v
Shiori Tsumi at 5:38AM, Oct. 20, 2006
o.O What are you doing, oniichan? I don't wanna spam my own comments, but I just have to say this. -_- I mean...really, oniichan...and yes, I do believe those are your only skills. AND THERE IS ALWAYS TIME FOR DDR! *one of the reasons Shi-chan can't come up with a comic* Sorry if this seems like spam of my own comments. Just had to say it to Kazuo.
Kazuo at 7:11PM, Oct. 19, 2006
Yay, I found your comic, Shiori! Hm... Photoshop tutorials, when there is time not taken up by DDR? There may be something to remove grain of the sketchbook that you're using. Also, to anyone else, Shiori and I are brother and sister. She's the smart one. I'm the... are my only skills computers and video games? Dangit. Anyhoo, this does seem like a good start.
Shiori Tsumi at 2:28PM, Oct. 14, 2006
Ah, thanks ya very muchly people. I'm pretty good at drawing, but I'm only just learning how to touch it up on the computer. I apologize if the comics are grainy, really; I'm getting better as I do the comics, but they still suck. I'll get better with time and practice, I'm sure. Also, those characters are OCs I made up for YuGiOh. Originally, they were just friends ...then my mind went into its yaoi fangirl mode and this pic popped up.
eternalsnow at 12:30PM, Oct. 14, 2006
read it all the pages up so far and i gotta say the story looks promesing. :D Hope to see another update... wait never mind you did update today. xD here is the proof. The coloring is good. But it is a tad bit small.
Nigellashade at 9:20AM, Oct. 14, 2006
I think many is updating a Yaoi/Yuri picture with their characters. I think it's becoming more common. O__O Good page filler, hope you have time to come back soon. ~M~ v~~~~v
rmccool at 9:13AM, Oct. 14, 2006
what medium are you using..mishi_hime says "your images are very grainy.its incrediably distracting." but i think the problem is medium and your editing tools more then size or your skill as an artist..this look like some of my early work back when i did them with colored pen and markers and what ever i had on hand. it takes time and work..and a lot of exparmentation to find what works for you a artist. for me its inked line art followed by digital color. which saves me some time .(still LWD pages take up to 5 hours from start to done rolls eyes).but it also keeps my hands from cramping up..one more suggestion do line art. art should alco be a way to relax and forget the real worlds problems..best of luck with the play web comics are a bit like pets more work then one would think. but fun
mishi_hime at 8:35AM, Oct. 14, 2006
ok. your images aren't of very good quality. granted online comics have to have small files, but your images are very grainy.its incrediably distracting. i also think you could post your pictures a little bit bigger. try saving them as a higher quality .jpg. my computer says this particualr image is around 13kb. you can go higher than that id stay in the 100-200kb range.
insanelysane at 8:01AM, Oct. 14, 2006
ooo... >) a very teasing pose indeed... hehehe.