There's a lot of splashing in this storyline. Even more coming tomorrow!
I actually drew this strip differently in the rough draft. Page 29 and 30 were actually just going to be one page, but I decided to pace it a little slower and spread it out. Remember to pace your work at a comfortable speed (unless you want the story moving uncomfortably fast), otherwise it'll just feel rushed. The first “chapter” of this comic feels a little rushed to me, but it slows down a bit about 1/2 way through. Also it's understandable as the beginnings of things usually introduce the readers to a lot of new information. It's hard to fit it all in.
Thank you, Deraymmou! It is good to know that the comic is coming along well by the readers' standards (as those are really the most important standards)!
I am extremely pleased with this comic so far! It's nice t have something new to read that's actually -good-. As oppose to picking up a handful of comics just because they were there and had pages to read
DJLink at 7:44PM, May 14, 2011
Heh.
Allan at 11:36AM, May 14, 2011
Thank you, Deraymmou! It is good to know that the comic is coming along well by the readers' standards (as those are really the most important standards)!
Deraymou at 7:25AM, May 14, 2011
I am extremely pleased with this comic so far! It's nice t have something new to read that's actually -good-. As oppose to picking up a handful of comics just because they were there and had pages to read
dragonestea at 4:57AM, May 14, 2011
His ability to talk with his mouth underwater is astounding!