The 4th wall
Belex on June 17, 2011
This page involved making a lot of changes. Some to the writing part which mostly showed up elsewhere, and some to the art. The most obvious of course is that the main character's hair style changed. That's right she has a lock of hair loose on the right side. I know that it got knocked out in the comic and she could easily put it back. But she won't. That's right I decided to change her hair style and just used this strip to do so. Even better yet I planed on changing it the whole time, and most certainly wasn’t bullied into it by her. A few of you might also have noticed that I changed the format of the comic too. I originally wanted to do a more classic newspaper strip but it meant I had to make the comic really small and since each original drawing is usual somewhere around 7”x10” to let me get the details right it was no extra work to make the comic bigger. So I flied it around and now it should be easier to read. You will have to scroll down of course but if you reading this you already figured that out. Last and least I changed the figure I was modeling the main character off of to make it a tad less realistic since I was doing the facial expressions more cartoonish and didn’t want to fall into the uncanny valley. Tell me what you think of the changes, the jokes, or anything really. There arnt a lot of people here in the middle of no where to talk to.
Ice 9 at 10:59PM, June 22, 2011
The up down thing is the new way a good number of comics are going.
Belex at 4:01PM, June 19, 2011
ya sorry about that I am a horrible speller for a writer. I caught the first dozen spelling errors but I guess a few slipped though. I will make sure to triple check everything in the future.
Banes at 9:31PM, June 18, 2011
Hi, It's interesting! Watch out for the punctuation and spelling, though. I don't know if most people care, but it's distracting when things are spelled wrong. When the narrator asks a question, it should end with a question mark ("Can we get back on topic, please?")...and the difference between "your" and "you're"...the last panel should be "you're". Just tryin' to help...a "meta" comic like this, driven by narration and dialogue, should definitely be spelled correctly. It's fun, though; I'll keep peeping it!