34 Budget cuts

Belex on Aug. 9, 2011

the next little bit is going to be a
bit wordy. Sadly all my wonderful schooling on pacing and tension
doesnt deal with pictures so I am experimenting a bit here. If
anyone has feed back that would be wonderful. I never really payed
attention to pacing in comics specifically before and everything I
learned deals with words only. That and since I am posting 5 days a
week some people are reading it all at once while others read it a
day at a time. I am working to please everybody but there will be a
bit of a learning curve. Some spots will be a bit slow, some too
wordy, and some too fast. If you let me know which are which I wont
have to spend as much time second guessing and can instead work on
improving the script that I don't acknowledge exists.