Congratulations on being featured! ^^ This is a great comic with lots of original, clever dialogue and ideas. It's good to see you're finally being recognized for that.
It's looking very good, I think. You might want to avoid hyphenating words if you can... messes with the graphic integrity. But all in all, very nice work!
this has a really amazing storyline, I just LOVE lough... he's the coolest ever.
At first, the flat, tone-free drawings bothered me, but I've grown accustomed/endeared to the sparseness.
(you should do more pages in color, if you have time!!! You have a good eye for color!)
^^ hehehe, this comic is really cute so far! I like it quite a bit. It's interesting to see a character that actually runs away from a fight instead of staying to beat everyone up. Nice job, and keep up the good work!
You say all your pages looks bad :( I beg to differ; they're actually quite good :) Also, the storyline's cute, and could get addictive. (damn you for addictivness!) So keep at it. And stop saying all your pages look bad, because (1) they don't, and (2) a lot of people really don't like that additude. So try to look positive on your artwork and if you're not happy with it, then work at it.
Keep it up, mah supuh artistic... person... uh... yeah.
fav.
I don't know why you say it didn't turn out well ... that's in YOUR mind ... I think there's a lot to think about in the page as a whole, interesting messages about humanity and sticking to your beliefs. Good work!
Hey, your lineart does look a lot better. ^_^ Maybe soon you'll be adding tones or color or something...ya.
Man, that coach really pushes Lough hard. I would hate that...then again, I'm not in much of good shape. XP
Hol Tiger at 11:03AM, Dec. 3, 2006
OH SH.... I wonder if this will make Lough into a transformer!
Dee at 12:53PM, Dec. 1, 2006
i really like your comic so far:3
rmccool at 11:51AM, Dec. 1, 2006
enjoy able reading :)
MadMaudlin at 11:16AM, Dec. 1, 2006
This comic is uber keen.
Oestaira at 11:14AM, Dec. 1, 2006
THank you all for your loverly comments! I'm excited about being featured, even though I have no idea what that means! XD
kittykattle90 at 11:01AM, Dec. 1, 2006
I shlove your line art ^_^ So pwetty! *awaits update eagerly* XD
Cheeko at 8:10AM, Dec. 1, 2006
Congratulations on being featured! ^^ This is a great comic with lots of original, clever dialogue and ideas. It's good to see you're finally being recognized for that.
chary at 5:36AM, Dec. 1, 2006
Great comic ^^. You've been fav'd, congrats on getting featured ;).
carrollhach at 4:59AM, Dec. 1, 2006
It's looking very good, I think. You might want to avoid hyphenating words if you can... messes with the graphic integrity. But all in all, very nice work!
Knuckles at 9:54PM, Nov. 30, 2006
Awesome!! ^__^ instant +Fav! And congrats on getting featured!
Kristen Gudsnuk at 9:35PM, Nov. 30, 2006
this has a really amazing storyline, I just LOVE lough... he's the coolest ever. At first, the flat, tone-free drawings bothered me, but I've grown accustomed/endeared to the sparseness. (you should do more pages in color, if you have time!!! You have a good eye for color!)
Snow Flower at 9:00PM, Nov. 30, 2006
^^ hehehe, this comic is really cute so far! I like it quite a bit. It's interesting to see a character that actually runs away from a fight instead of staying to beat everyone up. Nice job, and keep up the good work!
Chris chris at 6:40PM, Nov. 30, 2006
YAY! A new webcomic of a sort! Looks awesome! The story plot is sooooo damn cute!
Kiji at 4:27PM, Nov. 30, 2006
.... lol i dont think its lough needing to do those 100 sit-ups .......
hpkomic at 4:03PM, Nov. 30, 2006
Oest, you should probably apply a little line weight to the comics.
deleted-byrequest-03 at 3:41PM, Nov. 30, 2006
You say all your pages looks bad :( I beg to differ; they're actually quite good :) Also, the storyline's cute, and could get addictive. (damn you for addictivness!) So keep at it. And stop saying all your pages look bad, because (1) they don't, and (2) a lot of people really don't like that additude. So try to look positive on your artwork and if you're not happy with it, then work at it. Keep it up, mah supuh artistic... person... uh... yeah. fav.
Mr Mustard Seed at 3:39PM, Nov. 30, 2006
I don't know why you say it didn't turn out well ... that's in YOUR mind ... I think there's a lot to think about in the page as a whole, interesting messages about humanity and sticking to your beliefs. Good work!
DstrbdDrgn at 3:36PM, Nov. 30, 2006
stupid bully coach >< wow..found this comic today and i gotta give it to ya.....YOURRRR GOOOOOOODDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!! well...keep them coming ;D
Rina_ran at 11:49AM, Nov. 30, 2006
Hey, your lineart does look a lot better. ^_^ Maybe soon you'll be adding tones or color or something...ya. Man, that coach really pushes Lough hard. I would hate that...then again, I'm not in much of good shape. XP