Prologue: 11
valesse on Jan. 10, 2008
OnlineComics
Eek! the page is out late today, but it is out today! ha ha!
I'm kinda bummed guys… I was just getting into a PW comic and it seems to have vanished. : (
Buinne
valesse on Jan. 10, 2008
OnlineComics
Eek! the page is out late today, but it is out today! ha ha!
I'm kinda bummed guys… I was just getting into a PW comic and it seems to have vanished. : (
valesse at 1:44PM, Jan. 15, 2008
I don't mind it at all! In fact I completely agree. I was trying to keep making original-ish layouts but this one just didn't work how I wanted. I was on the fence about remaking this page, but now I definitely will... well... ASAP. :P
JustNoPoint at 6:15AM, Jan. 15, 2008
A small critic. Should try to lay out your panels in a way that guides the reader's eyes either through layout or through the images themselves. Arrows kinda take a way from the page a bit IMO Hope you don't mind opinionated criticism by the way, if so let me know!