Chapter One: Page Eleven

SilverSyntho on Jan. 19, 2008

Just one thing to say about this one.

I had a lot of trouble making this page. The facial expressions were a bitch to get right, especially Tala's in the last panel. I also wanted to have Eli draw his gun in the last panel, but I figured that might be a bit too far.

And then…when I had it done…my computer crashed and I had to redo the entire page. This involved recreating the script from memory, which was a bitch and a half. I forgot to include an essential bit of dialog in the last panel, namely Eli mentioning the Raug clan's dislike of Rook.

And on that note, friends, enjoy. :D