Well you had it... Some of it... For a while.
What I mean is, you had the text bubbles off to a good start. Allen Act 4 and Final Act are the examples. Basically though, you need to leave less white space around your text bubbles.
Secondly, recolors are a no-no. Try to edit some sprites and use those, if you need any help PQ me or go to my forum and get some help there.
I'm confused as to what is going on here. We started off at a battle, then it turned into some guy on a cliff, now this. What?
Two tone backgrounds aren't good either, another no-no. That can be easily fixed by searching websites like The Mystical Forest Zone, BGHQ, The Spriter's Resource etc. etc.
Edit sprites, make your stories clearer, get better backgrounds and fix the text bubbles.
That about wraps it up!
Glandis at 5:21PM, March 17, 2009
those acts took place at Night
zeion at 4:17PM, March 17, 2009
Also why is almost all your background have white dots on them?
ReaperEX at 4:02PM, March 17, 2009
Well you had it... Some of it... For a while. What I mean is, you had the text bubbles off to a good start. Allen Act 4 and Final Act are the examples. Basically though, you need to leave less white space around your text bubbles. Secondly, recolors are a no-no. Try to edit some sprites and use those, if you need any help PQ me or go to my forum and get some help there. I'm confused as to what is going on here. We started off at a battle, then it turned into some guy on a cliff, now this. What? Two tone backgrounds aren't good either, another no-no. That can be easily fixed by searching websites like The Mystical Forest Zone, BGHQ, The Spriter's Resource etc. etc. Edit sprites, make your stories clearer, get better backgrounds and fix the text bubbles. That about wraps it up!