ch02 p19
Soriyu on Aug. 5, 2007
As you may have noticed it's back to gags again. I'd like to know if anyone actually enjoys the gags or if you think they're a bit too silly. I plan to have the quantity of gags gradually decrease as the story goes on so if you don't find them funny then you're sort of in luck. But, who knows what could happen. If you really like them I might do more.
lucas at 6:52PM, June 14, 2009
LOL!! XD IS did she go under the table to smile it out! XD hahaha i love this! XD
skyangel at 4:42PM, Aug. 9, 2007
Just discovered this today,and read it right through, I think it's really great
Emma_Clare at 12:22AM, Aug. 9, 2007
ha ha thats precious!
Kristen Gudsnuk at 8:24PM, Aug. 6, 2007
ooh luke is so mean!! O_O she's got STIGMATA!!!! OMFG!
Soriyu at 4:29PM, Aug. 6, 2007
Yay, really interesting responses this week. wolfa & Jonko: Sorry, I didn't make it very clear. On the right side of the box where she says it's not poo there's this "po-" where he starts to say it, but it's not in a speech bubble so I suppose everyone thought it was some sound effect. I'll fix it up when I have a moment. Jonko: Thankyou for liking the gags. :) What's on her hand is a scab from falling over on the concrete the night before. I should probably drop a mention of scabs in too. Steely Gaze: Thankyou for your honesty. Infact, I agree with you, they do get in the way. I'll try to keep the level of jokes down for a while to defer to the story.
Steely Gaze at 3:39PM, Aug. 6, 2007
Mmm, I don't like the gags quite as much as the story. To me they seem to get in the way. Well this is a nice update though.
Jonko at 3:09PM, Aug. 6, 2007
haha, yeah I like the gags, but where did she get poo from? Poo on the brain? lol. What was that on her hand btw?
wolfa at 11:35AM, Aug. 6, 2007
Why does she assume that he thinks that it is poo? I am confused.... then again with me thats a permanant state so really I dunno why I'm even pointing it out. I'll be quiet now. *pull chair from nder desk and puts it the corner and sits on it*