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Litindir on July 1, 2008
Do you recall the non-dialogue page of Colombine and Pierrot a while back. This is why it was so important!
Here we have a scene when they actually talk, but nobody is suprised to find them in a gondola under the moon, because you have already seen them there once. This is an example of how my storytelling has matured since my last comic, and as you can probably tell I'm quite proud of it!
We also have new, improved eyes on Colombine, and her dress is now deep red (pink did look a bit weak).
Okay, let's just face it; this page is a good one! :p
raminda at 12:05PM, July 4, 2008
She's wearing a new dress? What did they do while we were watching Harl and Triv?
ghostrunner at 9:41PM, July 2, 2008
its habit XD
Emeraldas at 9:24PM, July 2, 2008
Her eyes look so pretty. I like the new style. I also liked how she called Pierrot her "black rose." Very poetic... very pretty.
Chameleon Kid at 1:52PM, July 2, 2008
Oh yes, I say it looks MARVELOUS! (0_o) Truly you have been improving, and it's amazing how short a time it has taken...^,^ Your coloring now has more depth, and your art style has matured--I loved it before, but I'm loving it just as much, if not more, now! ^o^
roycemarie at 10:45AM, July 2, 2008
I like the new eyes. Lovely. It is nice to read an artist who doesn't whine about how bad his work is.
bellagail at 10:22AM, July 2, 2008
i dont know what to say..uhh how about this: AWWWWEEEP!!!
Fly Hue at 6:16AM, July 2, 2008
Haha! I love the confidence in your author comment. XD And It's well deserved! Colombine's new eyes look much more natural and those liberally placed windows really do the trick of pulling the page all together.
THKNN_NUL at 5:53AM, July 2, 2008
Black Rose. Nice!