Page 20
CORY on Feb. 28, 2006
Page 20.
So, I know the text is small in panel 5… but it's supposed to be kinda rushed in that panel, read-wise, so if you can read it, good for you, if it kills your eyes, don't complain.
I didn't like this page until it was done, and even now it's not one of the best. I wanted to highlight some fuzzy backgrounds, but the damn text bubbles kept getting in the way, and in the end it looked all messy, so I'm just like: “Fuck this,” and I just stuck them wherever they worked best.
Also, there's another mini-section in the Extra section up top! Click it to find out the meanings of the characters' names, and some of the names just in general!
More Next week! FBoF Update tomorrah!
Edit: The last panel has been redrawn. For all who witnessed it, I apologize, for all who didn't, I think you should start praying.
bluebug at 8:49PM, Jan. 1, 2007
Megaphones should be standard issue for everyone on the planet.
shiina and steve at 2:11PM, April 1, 2006
Ohnoes! Sexism!
wtz at 7:22PM, March 26, 2006
Man... just... whoa your art style rocks.
CORY at 11:00PM, March 24, 2006
Always Rad. ALWAYS.
Radmetalmonk at 10:33PM, March 24, 2006
it's always J isn't it
Hamorhage at 12:08PM, March 22, 2006
after all this harasing u still didnt fix the link of FBOF..haha. Ah well it's dope dude! Anyway thx for ur comment on The Flea too! And text wise..ur right ..I straight damn suck, if you have nay ideas, bring it on dude! I mean yo ARE the reference how to present a comic.
Razii Jinx at 9:49PM, March 19, 2006
HAHA! IT'S COR!
CORY at 6:35PM, March 13, 2006
JEEZE, HAMOR. With all of that puching and mistreating, I finally FIXED THE LINK.
Hamorhage at 12:01PM, March 13, 2006
FBOF is still ace dude, ashame we can't hit ya back with feedback on that page, Fix the link bro
CORY at 11:02AM, March 8, 2006
The update will be a little late; one or two days. School.
CORY at 9:14AM, March 4, 2006
Hamor, I thoroughly appreciate that.
Ozoneocean at 7:14PM, March 3, 2006
The poor gal! Ah well, the page looks good and the dialogue is cool.
Hamorhage at 11:37AM, March 2, 2006
wow dude, you're so pro. The characters look way cool, the lettering is cool, heck everything is cool!
Chickenfoot at 6:12AM, March 2, 2006
Wahoo! this makes my day...and possibly the rest of my weekend
Holyknight at 4:34PM, March 1, 2006
hahahahaha... sad Jane...
Habilis_Orian at 3:47PM, March 1, 2006
That is funny, "Get your PMS ass in there", ha!
CORY at 11:56PM, Feb. 28, 2006
That could be taken two ways, Coy.
Coydog at 11:56PM, Feb. 28, 2006
My PMS ass would be barely restrained from jumping down his throat.