Valentines>Orange Angel, Yellow Dog
carly_mizzou on Feb. 12, 2007
Once an orange angel was assigned to protect a yellow dog. His last chance before being demoted to purgatory, he has to put another life before his own desires for an entire lifetime.
Orange was not the most attentive guardian angel, but Yellow dog was by far the stupidest dog ever fathomed by man or God.
On the first day, Orange was distracted for a mere second, and yellow dog took a long walk off a short pier and fell into the ocean. He was washed out to sea while all Orange could do was watch helpless. After some time it seemed that Yellow dog would drown alone in the ocean, but out of nowhere a mermaid came along.
She scooped up Yellow dog, looking for a safe place to put him as she could not approach the mainland. She found a (very) small rock island and placed Yellow dog there promising to feed and take care of the poor stupid creature.
The mermaid was kind and spent much of her days caring for the Yellow Dog she now loved, but Orange was a different story. Orange loved the mermaid. He hated that Yellow dog got all of her affection and was too dumb to know how lucky he was. It ate at every bit of Orange's soul that the mermaid would never know he existed or of all the hours he spent thinking of only her.
Years went by, and as each one passed the Orange Angel grew more bitter, more angry, and most of jealous of the little Yellow dog. Until one day he could take no more, when the mermaid left he kicked the Yellow Dog into the ocean and smiled as he watched the dog drown. It wasn't until later when the mermaid came back and saw the dog floating in ocean, dead, did he realized what he had done.
She cried harder than she ever had. Her love was gone, and she too gave up living, spending her last few days alone and broken. The Orange Angel was sent to purgatory, forced to feel all the pain he had caused, left with his broken heart for eternity…
EggNog at 1:55PM, April 28, 2012
Ther goes my good mood for the day :D
frozenbear at 7:42AM, April 12, 2008
i would just like to say thank you for the story... wow
pikmin250 at 8:36PM, Feb. 21, 2008
u no, purgatory is not as bad as every1 says it is, it is horrible if u weren't pure evil, but if u weren't good enough 2 make the cut either. but if u were so evil that u went into a state of anti-good, then u actually get the same treatment in heaven minus the pain-in-the-ass 24-7 praising u do in heaven, i swear, god is so self-absorbed.
Ganolink at 8:19AM, Dec. 26, 2007
How did that dog come to the middle of the ocean
Deraymou at 2:44AM, Dec. 20, 2007
Well ym day just got ruined...
Flamen Tenebrarum at 6:32AM, Dec. 7, 2007
Suddenly I feel something heavy inside.
Ersatz at 2:00AM, June 19, 2007
Excellent!
V5220 at 8:15PM, June 8, 2007
Wow! I like stories like this! You should make more!!!!
Conned at 8:28AM, April 5, 2007
AHA! Thats what you've been doing all this time. Well, congrats on your promotion :)
ketenol at 6:36PM, April 4, 2007
Awesome
lefarce at 10:23AM, March 23, 2007
Updaaaaaate! :(
Raffle at 10:30AM, March 21, 2007
Wicked Drawing
Crazy Dutchman at 6:59AM, March 21, 2007
Soooooo fantastic :O
Allan at 9:16PM, March 12, 2007
That page is colored beautifully
lefarce at 12:03AM, March 6, 2007
:(
Taco at 10:26PM, March 3, 2007
That should so be a wallpaper.
lefarce at 7:41PM, March 1, 2007
You alive?
F_Allen at 1:08PM, Feb. 27, 2007
creepy
Sum0 at 5:08AM, Feb. 18, 2007
wowwwwwwwwwww Carly! It's you! Great picture and... er... confusing story... but still awesome.
coolio at 10:33PM, Feb. 17, 2007
Hmm...yellow puppie, orange angel, mermaid? what symbolic refrence can I syndicate this with? Corrupt childhood perhaps?
Daf42 at 5:34AM, Feb. 17, 2007
And there was I thinking there would be some sort of happy ending
lefarce at 10:52PM, Feb. 16, 2007
Just hopin' you have your alerter on. I wrote back, by the way.
carly_mizzou at 10:08PM, Feb. 16, 2007
Updates all around tuesday. Just wanted to thank you all for reading my little diversion.
Bipolar Crab at 1:15AM, Feb. 16, 2007
You are one sick puppy! I like that!
Nightmare Zero at 12:27PM, Feb. 15, 2007
wow. that's dark.