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Michii on Oct. 28, 2009
Took me like 6 hours, which is fitting for the page number I guess.
I tried to bring the saturation up on this one. Whenever I post my art on the internet, the saturation goes down lots. :/
Anyway, she's inching her way out of the room. I promise.
I'm getting antsy, I want to draw the other characters already!
Michii at 2:36PM, Nov. 23, 2009
The same way she got into that strange room.
HellsoulWolf at 4:32PM, Nov. 22, 2009
lol! i am still wondering how she got those bandages...
Michii at 7:37PM, Nov. 7, 2009
Emuchan, I'll put the nudity when it's necessary. I can't just give it all the time! XD And I know that some of you guys don't like the transparent bubbles, but... But... I NEED THEM
Rival Comics at 7:04AM, Nov. 6, 2009
Still looks great! I have to agree with justnopoint, the transparent balloons are a little distracting, but it doesn't really take away from the comic. Nice job!
Emuchan at 10:56AM, Nov. 2, 2009
Would it have hurt to show here WHOLE body when she dropped the bandages? Your art is good enough to feed us some nudity!
Michii at 11:23AM, Oct. 29, 2009
Wow, lots of comments for this one! Thanks guys! (@JustNoPoint: The reason they're clear is that she's thinking, not speaking. But I'm new so I'll be playing around a lot. @Final: Thanks for the input, I'll see what I can do! @Peipei: :D
Peipei at 6:29AM, Oct. 29, 2009
Wow, so beautiful ^^
finalfantasyfreak_07 at 6:11AM, Oct. 29, 2009
Hunh, a surprising lack of comments on the comic overall, which is strange, considering the quality of the comic is a lot better than quite a few things I've seen on the site (and believe me, I've done nothing but browse quiiiite a few times). The quality of the artwork is good, and your use of digital coloring is slightly on the cotton-puffy side, but if I can enjoy it, then you're probably doing something right. :) The only thing I can really nitpick this early in is the overuse of exposition. There are a few shots where you can show, rather than tell, either what's on her mind and her confusion, or a few panels where she's analyzing the unfamiliarity of the room. I'll be favoriting this to follow you along, so don't let me down. Here's to a good start. :D
JustNoPoint at 5:50AM, Oct. 29, 2009
Oh and, I don't know how you take criticism yet. So let me know if I ever cross the line, but making the word balloons see through is a bit of a pet peeve for a lot of readers. Myself included =p Don't be afraid of the balloons covering your art. In comics they are an extension of your art, storytelling, pacing, and flow. Keep up the good work.
JustNoPoint at 5:27AM, Oct. 29, 2009
Your coloring is quite nice. I'll keep an eye on this and see where the story goes. :)
Michii at 5:19AM, Oct. 29, 2009
Oh yeah. FANSERVICE~! Except that the cloth is blocking everything. LOOOOL.