CHAPTER SEVEN, Page 2

alschroeder on April 23, 2013

Also, basically MM is a little on the prudish/shy side. But her overreaction had to be explained a little.
In the original outline, I was going to have Yuuki slug MM, but Kittyhawk (rightly) thought that was too over-the-top for Yuuki, who takes a while to get REALLY mad. But we needed to touch on this a bit.
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