Prologue 1 - Page 13
teddy_picker on Feb. 16, 2009
yeah, just like the 12th page…this one is quite fast too^^
*p.s. is using of strong language allowed here?* 0_0
Cuervo de Caza
teddy_picker on Feb. 16, 2009
yeah, just like the 12th page…this one is quite fast too^^
*p.s. is using of strong language allowed here?* 0_0
HyenaHell at 6:09AM, Feb. 17, 2009
Nice! RE: language- if you're gonna drop the F-bomb, probably I'd bump the rating up to "Mature". Most Teen-rated comics have mild swearing- "hell", "damn", etc. You can check the rating guidlines (there's a thread in the Debate/Discussion forum) or PQ an admin if you're unsure. :)
TheMidge28 at 5:57AM, Feb. 17, 2009
the action and the posing looks nice but some of the text on previous pages seem a bit digitized you might want to try fonting at a larger size and then resixe the page. just a thought.