Part One: 8
sloo on Jan. 6, 2008
I actually started this page randomly but I finished it up and I really like how it turned out.
The problem is these transition pages are a bit boring to read and offer no real storyline moves but serve more as eye candy. So here you can see Wrench going though the airlock process and turning on his BPS (Burst Propulsion System) to get around. He has magnetic boots but the BPS lets him have a little fun while he's outside the Dillinger.
In any case, enjoy and let me know what you think! :D
junoblairb at 11:30AM, Jan. 11, 2008
I really agree with was dogtopus mentioned about the last panel. I'm personally a little confused about everything that's going on but maybe I'm not as space savvy. That btw, is the hottest gloved hand I think I've ever seen. XD
dogtopus at 11:12AM, Jan. 9, 2008
The last panel imo is a bit underwhelming; I love how the tones build up brighter in the first 3 panels, with the dark pause on panel 4. A super bright WHAM FIRE!!! in the last panel would really kick it off imo. If the last panel was brighter it would also balance out the tones across the page too; bright > dark > bright! :D It's a great buildup, but the finish is a little flat. But still great! :D
Rudolf at 10:14PM, Jan. 8, 2008
the lighting i love it