legendary lunatics 2 the saiyans
drunk ducky121 on Aug. 2, 2010
i know the word bubble in one of the panels is messed up but it was just a mistake
other then that i really liked how this comic came out,the plot thikened and i thought that everyhtiong was pretty nice and nest issue even more will come
Ettie at 9:12PM, Aug. 3, 2010
WAY BETTER! Uhm, whats up with the chatbubble in panel six? The tail is like too thick. STILL need punctuation at the ends of sentences, but better. Capitalize Vegeta please! Panel 1 "Palent" is not a word and it is followed by an uncapitalized "i" which needs to be "I" Use Microsoft Words for his spelling mistakes.