legendary lunatics 3 king kai
drunk ducky121 on Aug. 3, 2010
first:i know this comic is boring i'll try to upload another one today im not promising though
second:king kais voice came from the top of panels because i really didnt know where else it should come from
Ettie at 7:03PM, Aug. 4, 2010
There are still grammer errors. FIX THEM ALREADY. Panels are better, but use thicker borders. Character's names should always be capitalized! you're not "youre" need the apostrophe. Thank you for fixing the capitalization at the beginning of each sentence. Just a few more things to work on before your comic will get a 5.