Ewan's Bio
SheaSummers on Oct. 19, 2006
To those that sort of don't get what's going on, this bio should give a bit of an insight to why the main character is looking more and more like a terrorist rebel.
SheaSummers on Oct. 19, 2006
To those that sort of don't get what's going on, this bio should give a bit of an insight to why the main character is looking more and more like a terrorist rebel.
FarkingBush at 11:00PM, Oct. 20, 2006
yeah, i have to agree with shea there. it's a basic summary of the characters life, its fine as is. this IS a filler. get with the updates alread!
SheaSummers at 10:58PM, Oct. 20, 2006
Well thanks for the advice, but no thanks. This is a rundown summary of what has happened so far chronologically, so putting similar items together would be confusing. Also, it's not long enough to add titles, since it's one big bio. I'm using the format most published comics and certain video games use, but thanks.
BigFishComic at 7:32PM, Oct. 20, 2006
mn. ozone makes a good point. hey, this is ALMOST another filler~ get with the updating!
Ozoneocean at 4:07AM, Oct. 20, 2006
Not bad, but I would stronly suggest that you organise and format the text a it better: cenetering the paragraphs is bad, and I would seperate blocks of related text into seperate boxes (either a border outline, or an opaque background fill colour). You could also include little titles with them. Use your comic layout skills to arange them. :)
insanelysane at 3:35AM, Oct. 20, 2006
oooo O_O interesting!