Shirtgoth: Well, after realizing we hadn't posted this on time, we found the server was down. It's still Thursday, so here's the update.
A big thank you to Skyangel of simply sarah for the plug last week! I love her characterization and the teenage searching of just who we are that will more define our adult lives.
well done on panel 2...the art is gorgeous as always...the story though is very cloudy...maybe intentionally...have you though of using a different font for the dialogue? reason ask...if these be drow then I would think a text more agressive or gothic may be fitting...also white on black like the narration text...just some thoughts...not trying to be a jerk the work is beautiful.
TheMidge28 at 6:53AM, Aug. 10, 2007
well done on panel 2...the art is gorgeous as always...the story though is very cloudy...maybe intentionally...have you though of using a different font for the dialogue? reason ask...if these be drow then I would think a text more agressive or gothic may be fitting...also white on black like the narration text...just some thoughts...not trying to be a jerk the work is beautiful.
skyangel at 2:33PM, July 27, 2007
I'm really starting to get into this story now!
Emma_Clare at 6:54PM, July 26, 2007
someone is in reaaallll trouble!
RapidoBlue at 2:32PM, July 26, 2007
oooooooooooo, the artwork is really cool