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Lodukas on May 19, 2007
After reading this you dont understand a thing but it´s nothing wrong. You´r not suppose to understand a thing of the first page. (well somethings you may understand)
Lodukas on May 19, 2007
After reading this you dont understand a thing but it´s nothing wrong. You´r not suppose to understand a thing of the first page. (well somethings you may understand)
Wes_Nero123 at 5:15PM, May 20, 2007
A few gramatical errors(I like using big words) and puntcuation. Also The protagonist(main character) is just a purple recolor. But the effects are great so you get a five for now, but I would prefer if you actually edited to your character(clothes, number of quills, shape of quills, weapons, etc.), but I will fave this so I can keep an eye on its progress =).
riku valentine at 3:33PM, May 20, 2007
Shadow... no! fucking sonic has to DIE NOW!
Flame the Hybrid at 3:12PM, May 20, 2007
And someonelse here has a good way of telling a story :D Nice and Dark :D
Flame the Hybrid at 3:08PM, May 20, 2007
You make me a [b]SAD[/b] panda for killing Shadow D:
Flame the Hybrid at 3:03PM, May 20, 2007
Pretty good :D