+ death's apprentice + - prologue p6
mintyfreshmangos on Feb. 17, 2008
Putting the pressure on Kiroe. *pokepokepoke*
Oh…this comic is already in progress on Smackjeeves. ^^;
http://deathsapprentice.smackjeeves.com/
If you want to read ahead a few more pages. I only have 2 more pages on SJ. ^^;
PottymouthPress at 10:39AM, March 24, 2008
Pen tool could help with the voice bubble points. Make those, then add Stroke to that whole layer. Beyond that, the bubbles look great!
jazkitty at 5:50PM, March 21, 2008
Go with him! GO!...I'll go!
abitdark at 1:00PM, March 20, 2008
but he doesn't even have candy. :(
jissai at 6:48PM, Feb. 23, 2008
hes so persistent ^^; ooo, u have a syth in ur comic TOO!
mintyfreshmangos at 5:42PM, Feb. 18, 2008
Ohh...I see. You can't put anything in the bendy brackets cause DD thinks it's coding....hmmmm Thanks for the crit, Jilly! *writes it down*
mintyfreshmangos at 5:38PM, Feb. 18, 2008
Oh hey! Some one commented! THANK YOU!
Sylvyr Elf at 5:37PM, Feb. 18, 2008
I like it. Your artwork is well done, and you have a good start going.
JillyFoo at 5:36PM, Feb. 18, 2008
I say so far this comic is pretty good, but don't force the dialogue at the end of the page. The arguing feels unnecessary.