#10 - The Cavalry Has Arrived!
Mr Shovels on Aug. 28, 2006
OI!!! So… I'm extreamly proud of this page. *gloats in the pleasure of doing something sorta good*
The shading is a big to dark for me on the second panel, but I think it still turned out to work alright. I think the 4th and 2nd panels are by far my favourite. And I worked freaking hard on this because I felt so bad for giving you all a crappy update last time.
As you can all see I'm playing aruond a bit with the orangment of the panels and I guess you could say a different layout behind them.
Anyone have any thoughts or suggestions on this? You like it better than the old paneling? I would like very much to know what you all prefer.
And ideas and constructive criticism are of course welcome. Give Mr Shovels your thoughts!
Nigellashade at 9:34PM, Aug. 31, 2006
A lot of things is happening in this page, with many situations you did a good job at positioning the story-flow with the panels. Good update! ~M~ v~~~~v
qwerty at 9:09AM, Aug. 31, 2006
wow u should start selling ur art with signatures on it for fenomanal fees! :) cool comic
josif at 5:29AM, Aug. 30, 2006
you are a awesomly good artist!