THe punch is supposed to be poor because it looks fun like that :D Go watch DR. Tran and you'll see. And yea he kind alooks like he's dancing but he's stomping his foot in anger.
once again, a bit of work on positions (for the punch, have the fist go past the elf guy's face, so it looks like he's absolutely owning him. Fourth panel could use a bit more look like dancing in anticipation (if that's what you were going for)
Once again, novel effort, jsut needs some work, man.
Danerage at 6:10PM, Sept. 17, 2006
THe punch is supposed to be poor because it looks fun like that :D Go watch DR. Tran and you'll see. And yea he kind alooks like he's dancing but he's stomping his foot in anger.
The mediocre one at 3:36PM, Sept. 17, 2006
once again, a bit of work on positions (for the punch, have the fist go past the elf guy's face, so it looks like he's absolutely owning him. Fourth panel could use a bit more look like dancing in anticipation (if that's what you were going for) Once again, novel effort, jsut needs some work, man.
Manio at 6:12AM, Sept. 17, 2006
Sweetnage
Kamekaze at 11:35PM, Sept. 16, 2006
YAYAYAYA, Favourite one so far XD