alright. i looked over the whole thing. kay umm good stuff is, is that i see your trying really hard and you have a good connection with your charicters. i ferget..how old did you say you were? 13? well if you are this is pretty good for 13. anyways, try inking and shading it (kinda like what i do with my comic) it takes longer and its a pain in the ass, but the overall presentaion is alot better. umm and atleast your comic panels are nice and square and sectioned off, heh when i started comicing, all my stuff was a complete mess! it sucked. so anyways, my advice to you is to draw EVERY DAY. dont force it, just carry your sketch book around with you everywhere and when your in a place thats boring (like school or errands with parents) just start sketching and stuff. umm oh and read alot of different manga eith different styles in them, study them and perhaps use them as influential peices to give you ideas for angles or movement action stuff for your comic...so im not saying to copy other manga, use use them as helpfull guidelines. umm yeah and i think thats it..so keep trying, and good luck! (^^)
Tatsu at 2:26PM, June 3, 2007
alright. i looked over the whole thing. kay umm good stuff is, is that i see your trying really hard and you have a good connection with your charicters. i ferget..how old did you say you were? 13? well if you are this is pretty good for 13. anyways, try inking and shading it (kinda like what i do with my comic) it takes longer and its a pain in the ass, but the overall presentaion is alot better. umm and atleast your comic panels are nice and square and sectioned off, heh when i started comicing, all my stuff was a complete mess! it sucked. so anyways, my advice to you is to draw EVERY DAY. dont force it, just carry your sketch book around with you everywhere and when your in a place thats boring (like school or errands with parents) just start sketching and stuff. umm oh and read alot of different manga eith different styles in them, study them and perhaps use them as influential peices to give you ideas for angles or movement action stuff for your comic...so im not saying to copy other manga, use use them as helpfull guidelines. umm yeah and i think thats it..so keep trying, and good luck! (^^)