sword_dagger at 3:08AM, June 6, 2008

thank you for the advice osama. Actually to be "totally honest" with you, I actually started this story story about 4 months ago and I really have MANY more pages already done. I am only updating one a day so that I can keep my pace and that everyone can enjoy a new page a day. I'm glad you all enjoy.

QSAMA at 6:54PM, June 5, 2008

very nice! you have alot of potential and i like that youre trying out daring concepts, with that said be sure to study your basics anatomy perspective etc, and that will really make the art pop, another thing i feel like you may be rushing a bit for the sake of your update schedule while i appreciate your ambition i think if you took more time to work on your pages that wouldnt be sucha bad thing so if you could only update once a week but your pages were spectacular that wouldnt be terrible would it? all in all im very impressed ill be faving this! question tho if she is about to kill her why did she warn her?

sword_dagger at 2:40PM, June 5, 2008

thanks sei. This is my first manga. I actually drew "many" mini stories before this, but this is my first long one. I will try to make sure that every day there is a new one.

Sei at 2:34PM, June 5, 2008

Wow, I am very impressed with this. Is this your first comic? The story carries very well and the action, angles, perspectives, and detailing are very good. I wish I had your self-discipline and dedication- spitting out one page everyday! That's hard to do D:. Keep up with the excellent work, you've made awesome progress so far. And with the skill you're at now, you'll improve your drawing ability in no time. :3

Black Madness at 2:04PM, June 5, 2008

Kewl!. :D