#19
Aurora Borealis on April 13, 2008
I drew them too close. Also, his hair on the first panel looks as if a polar bear crawled onto his head and died there.
More drawn lettering, more colored inks… why do I mention these anyway? :)
Basically the cop (or guard) on the first panel should be pulled a bit back. And the pavement… omg, what cartoon did it escape from? :)
Next page: April 16th.
harkovast at 5:56PM, Dec. 5, 2008
That seemed a bit harsh! The cop thought (quite reasonably) that the guy was the murderer. I suppose he is the murderer now...