thanks everypne for your comments ^^, I was hoping id get some ideas on areas I need to work on seein this is my first sprite comic really. Im gonna try and fix my bubbles but ive been unsuccessful so far so ill just have to keep trying its hard finding a bubble I can adjust in size and still keep MANY on a page at once (i dont like untalkative scenes that much really unless theirs a major fight since I find no talking too unrealistic lol)
I agree, chat bubbles need work in the sense that there are many people per comic box, and that some of the words are outside the chat bubble. All other areas of the comic are very good. I like your idea here, I'm a big fan of the Disgaea series.
Good comic, but it needs a little bit of work on the word balloons. Check out my comic, Animania, to see the difference. And if you need help, just pq me. ^-^
GrimReap at 10:43PM, May 17, 2008
Kewl I thought I was the only commentor phew ^^'
Kyotita at 8:32AM, April 19, 2008
thanks everypne for your comments ^^, I was hoping id get some ideas on areas I need to work on seein this is my first sprite comic really. Im gonna try and fix my bubbles but ive been unsuccessful so far so ill just have to keep trying its hard finding a bubble I can adjust in size and still keep MANY on a page at once (i dont like untalkative scenes that much really unless theirs a major fight since I find no talking too unrealistic lol)
Ettie at 6:00AM, April 19, 2008
I agree, chat bubbles need work in the sense that there are many people per comic box, and that some of the words are outside the chat bubble. All other areas of the comic are very good. I like your idea here, I'm a big fan of the Disgaea series.
Kyotita at 9:06PM, April 18, 2008
lol I dont want to go THAT FAR....and besides I have no guts sprites ive pulled together >.>
BloodTh at 7:49PM, April 18, 2008
Shit! It's not bloody enough! his guts should be showing, man!
poonipoonz at 7:17PM, April 18, 2008
Good comic, but it needs a little bit of work on the word balloons. Check out my comic, Animania, to see the difference. And if you need help, just pq me. ^-^