Etna & Laharl
Kyotita on April 23, 2008
New word bubbles AND story progression on the same page!! OMG!!!
We see why Etna is acting the way she is and Laharl begins to suspect something is very wrong with her
Disgaea the Kyotita Saga
Kyotita on April 23, 2008
New word bubbles AND story progression on the same page!! OMG!!!
We see why Etna is acting the way she is and Laharl begins to suspect something is very wrong with her
Ettie at 6:56PM, April 24, 2008
Nice improvment to your comic! The chat bubbles look better! ^^ I like how the story is developing. You may need to use bigger font or something to make the words easier to read. Box 4 and 5 have good font, because even though it is small, it is easy to read.
poonipoonz at 6:17PM, April 24, 2008
Alright. Pq me on everything you think you still need help with. :D
Kyotita at 6:07PM, April 24, 2008
oy I dont know what else I can do with them and still fit the words...
poonipoonz at 6:06PM, April 24, 2008
It's starting to look better. But do you want some som tips on the word balloons and the resizing? Cuz they're still not close to perfection.