Yeah. I tried out a motion blur in the second to last panel. What is she looking at? Tune in next time to find out– Next time, on the infrequently updated DOODLES IN TIME TWO POINT OHHHH!
Thank you for the comments, and the constructive critisism! (It helps a lot, seriously, thank you! *hugs*) Anyways, who does she see? Heh, you'll have to wait 'till next time!
I wouldn't be blushing or anything, man! If anything, I'd be yelling at that 'serious bishie.' Excellent page, I can't wait for the next... just to see how worthy of a blush this guy is....
I don't know if you accept constructive critisism, but I'll give it anyway. The lines could stand to be a bit more solid and less sketchy looking. But if you're fine with that, then that's perfectly... fine? I'm only saying because I'm picky. I also think the panels could have been better organized, and the text would look very nice typed. But I love where the comic is headed! Good luck on it.
Kasablanca at 8:56AM, Dec. 19, 2006
I bet everyone here that she runs into the hottest guy in school and of course her love interest of this story!
A S F at 10:13PM, June 24, 2006
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aLeX O at 4:31AM, May 13, 2006
Waaaa I was censored! what I was trying to say was... (Dang)(they censor THAT, wow) you can draw really well
A S F0 at 4:14PM, May 11, 2006
This isnt a chat room people...
Deth iz mi Request at 3:16PM, May 10, 2006
Dont criticize a comic unless you think you can do it better-Number one rule-(this does not include constructive critisism)
aLeX O at 12:44PM, May 10, 2006
Damn you are good at this... wish I was that good STreicher must DIE!!!!
gp34 at 6:40PM, May 9, 2006
[D&T]: awww she fell :( ... LOVE the ART!
Deth iz mi Request at 3:31PM, May 9, 2006
when will you updatee!!!!!!
Milky at 3:14PM, May 9, 2006
We need more updates!
Neilak20 at 9:45PM, May 8, 2006
super cute as always Shippochan
Deth iz mi Request at 4:11PM, May 8, 2006
btw, I am not John Michael,so dont be thinkin' that
Deth iz mi Request at 3:54PM, May 8, 2006
I love your comic O_O wow, now I might actually HAVE to read it now
Deth iz mi Request at 2:54PM, May 7, 2006
I also love chibbi, chibbi....@_@
mimiche at 3:54PM, May 6, 2006
motion blue/speed lines is coool! Looks awesome! Aaaaw blushies~
Deth iz mi Request at 3:01PM, May 6, 2006
who did she bump into, heh problbly Aaron, or Badr, or somebody
Deth iz mi Request at 3:00PM, May 6, 2006
I love Fiona...love her, she must be mine...-twitch twitch-
Kraddius at 6:05AM, May 6, 2006
Muaheheh.. luff ya, Chibi and Kate-Senseeei!! Wish i can put my drawings here.. v.v lol but 'neways... i luff it!! meeha must hug ya MOOORE noow!!
Shippo_no_Neko at 1:38PM, May 5, 2006
Thank you for the comments, and the constructive critisism! (It helps a lot, seriously, thank you! *hugs*) Anyways, who does she see? Heh, you'll have to wait 'till next time!
Dog0551 at 12:14PM, May 5, 2006
Hurry! And Kiji....your being an idiot again, if she saw scott I say she would have a disgusted look n her face. hmmmmm...
incognito-mystery-person at 10:03PM, May 4, 2006
I wouldn't be blushing or anything, man! If anything, I'd be yelling at that 'serious bishie.' Excellent page, I can't wait for the next... just to see how worthy of a blush this guy is.... I don't know if you accept constructive critisism, but I'll give it anyway. The lines could stand to be a bit more solid and less sketchy looking. But if you're fine with that, then that's perfectly... fine? I'm only saying because I'm picky. I also think the panels could have been better organized, and the text would look very nice typed. But I love where the comic is headed! Good luck on it.
JesusofSuburbia at 5:50PM, May 4, 2006
omg, suspense! this is killing me! who did she run into! who who who! X_x/)
Kiji at 3:59PM, May 4, 2006
love the last panel
Kiji at 3:59PM, May 4, 2006
oooooooooooooooo shes blushing its prob. scott or mikie ... or both!
MagickLorelai at 12:48PM, May 4, 2006
O.o I'm having trouble seeing the page...Some reason it's not showing up.
Slashk45 at 4:17PM, May 3, 2006
Why again am I late for an update? Ah well....