Lucky number Nine - p10
Ryjia on Jan. 27, 2008
There are no backgrounds at all in this page. It looks so damn empty. I do kind of like the art though: The hand looks good, I adore Luck laughing and Nine's creepy expression.
The only thing I really can't stand is the knife, it doesn''t even look like a knife… I think I should have given Nine bigger boobies too, she's a tad to tiny compared to earlier pages.
Ryjia at 7:25AM, Dec. 2, 2009
Yeah I know. Neck is way too thin and placed back too much. I believe I´ve already had advice for that and I think it got better.
Jathope at 11:47PM, Dec. 1, 2009
I am not the one to talk, but how about fixing the neck placement?