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F_Allen on Feb. 20, 2007
please point out if u see any typos cause im real bad at grammar and stuff.
im trying really hard to not let certain narrative elements to take over. but its the nature of the madness that they try.
F_Allen on Feb. 20, 2007
please point out if u see any typos cause im real bad at grammar and stuff.
im trying really hard to not let certain narrative elements to take over. but its the nature of the madness that they try.
sjcomix at 4:24AM, Oct. 6, 2010
I like this page, the lighting, somewhat (grim-introvert atmousfer) and color of the panel-scene, draws you in.
wildcard at 3:47PM, Sept. 14, 2009
I'm becoming progressively more and more intrigued. Your artwork has an atmospheric quality to it which really draws me in.
Archangel at 6:13AM, May 3, 2007
I'm a little confused, but I imagine I can figure it out when I finish reading ^_^ Which unfortinetly I can't do now T_T
F_Allen at 12:29PM, Feb. 25, 2007
i thought about it. Im about to try another style after the page im gonna update tommorrow, i start another style. y fav illustrator is dave mckean, im gonna try some mixed media.
brendino at 11:51AM, Feb. 25, 2007
Very, very nice. I actually loved the style of your rough drafts, it would be awesome if there were a comic book made completely with that style, just for a change of pace. And yeah, I would stay away from jokes for something like this.
Eunice P at 1:48AM, Feb. 25, 2007
Very very artistic style. I never expected artistic comic would contain humor. :)
Mr E at 1:39AM, Feb. 25, 2007
Beautiful work my friend. I'm going to be looking out for this one in the future. No spelling mistakes as far as I could see...maybe instead of "nerves" you used "nervous"? Otherwise good work. I would appreciate it if you took the time to check out my comic, I just started it, but I really like where it's going so far. It's called 'Tipsy in Tights' and it's about superheroes on their time off from saving the world....basically they're just like you and me. Thanks man.
Dark Chamber at 12:18AM, Feb. 25, 2007
cool comic love it!!!
Custard Trout at 4:48PM, Feb. 24, 2007
This is going on my favourites. And I think the time zone is GMT -5
Radmetalmonk at 12:34PM, Feb. 24, 2007
The narrative has sung to me.
Phantom Penguin at 4:55AM, Feb. 23, 2007
awesome style man. nice mix between serious and humor.
Darkmax at 7:23PM, Feb. 22, 2007
VERY NICE!!!!!!! Byron (The Devilfish Project)
Mr Mustard Seed at 2:07PM, Feb. 22, 2007
you've got my attention now ... Senor Allen. Keep creatin'
F_Allen at 1:36PM, Feb. 22, 2007
Thanks. its all simple gradient fills on another photoshop layer
Friedenmann at 10:31AM, Feb. 22, 2007
The light is impressive.
F_Allen at 7:08AM, Feb. 22, 2007
i took the humour out, it detracted i think from the story thats coming. i recon i might be able to have the next page up by saturday. which time zone does this site run on? anybody know?
slimredninja at 4:03PM, Feb. 21, 2007
great writing a little ethos mixed with your pathos is fine
F_Allen at 1:47PM, Feb. 21, 2007
tell me if the jokes detracting from it