I will point out that the hair on a lot of your male characters looks as though it's sinking into the skull. It gives the head an uneven choppy look that hinders on the overall beauty that the character is supposed to present. I suggest making the back of the head a tad bit rounder to even out the hairstyle you want to portray. Other than that this comic looks really nice and the story seems very interesting. ^^
Lilac at 8:38PM, Oct. 9, 2008
I will point out that the hair on a lot of your male characters looks as though it's sinking into the skull. It gives the head an uneven choppy look that hinders on the overall beauty that the character is supposed to present. I suggest making the back of the head a tad bit rounder to even out the hairstyle you want to portray. Other than that this comic looks really nice and the story seems very interesting. ^^
Mikato at 7:17PM, Oct. 2, 2008
this looks interesting