Now, for the style it looks OK, and it is quite defined and you can tell what the characters are doing. A little tip, try to learn about anatomy to make proportioned bodies, also you can look at refernce pictures if you don't know how to draw something. The thing is, the more you make it, the better you become. Hope you take this tips as a constructive critique and if you ever need some advise or help, feel free to ask ;)
Well, finishig reading your work ;). OK, first of all, congrats on publishing your work. Many people don't do it because of fear to critiques. But that's the best way to improve :) Your story begins with all the action packed stuff to catch readers, that's a good point. Try to be more dramatic on the dialogues and the actions. Sometimes you want to show a scene and rush things, but trust me, take your time to build up a good story.
Avart at 7:54PM, March 2, 2020
Now, for the style it looks OK, and it is quite defined and you can tell what the characters are doing. A little tip, try to learn about anatomy to make proportioned bodies, also you can look at refernce pictures if you don't know how to draw something. The thing is, the more you make it, the better you become. Hope you take this tips as a constructive critique and if you ever need some advise or help, feel free to ask ;)
Avart at 7:51PM, March 2, 2020
Well, finishig reading your work ;). OK, first of all, congrats on publishing your work. Many people don't do it because of fear to critiques. But that's the best way to improve :) Your story begins with all the action packed stuff to catch readers, that's a good point. Try to be more dramatic on the dialogues and the actions. Sometimes you want to show a scene and rush things, but trust me, take your time to build up a good story.