Fitz at 2:01AM, Oct. 19, 2007

This page is so chock-full of punchlines I don't even know where to start. Probably "That's my lunch money, jerk" and "That doesn't bend that way" LOL!

TheMidge28 at 8:31PM, July 21, 2007

I like it. very funny stuff from the rpg realm...

angry_black_guy at 7:21PM, May 8, 2007

Thanks for the advice, I'm used to hand inking and lettering so this is my first time doing anything digital. I write out a script which is up to page 20 right now and the whole thing with the adventurer was just there to introduce the main characters. I was also under some stress at work so it showed up in the art as this page looks way too plain and bright for the oil paint effect that I want.

slimredninja at 12:26PM, May 8, 2007

great looking page!!!

Mistchiff at 8:28AM, May 8, 2007

tired already dude you have a long ways to go. I would have planned colors befor startin these are to dark even tho its a cave and all you could have used colors with a tint of white to get some light in there. I think your panel work is good maybe not the last row its nothing big its just that the align like that makes it i dunno it doesent matter you think about if they dident align would look better imo.. You should place some bubbles above the heads of the characters more often then under. ABOVE is better just trust me on that. i think also you could have put another page just the hero entering the boss and then getting killed comedical. better comedic timing and story telling. PACE is importent in a comic this page goes to fast in the end. when you say few more pages it sounds you havent made a time line for each event say. Page1 to 5 will be in the cave doing all the events. 5 to 8 will be out the forest climbing trees conversing Do this it helps alot to keep track and to plan your pages better. Thas all keep going id also look over some structure in your art. cross line faces so you get aligned eyes and so forth. CYA! =D