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angry_black_guy on June 4, 2007
In the printed form, this spans over 2 pages. It wasn't in my original script, but I added it for several reasons
1: Show the valley from a wider angle; before, you only see it on a map and a small panel. Here, you get a good look at the town, the tower, and a small hovel in the hills… which will all come into play later.
2: Introduces Gurn's diary. I hate thought balloons with a passion so this is a way for me to flesh out Gurn's characters in a better light (he never could read but without this page it wouldn't be apparent to the reader until later).
3: It introduces Zed. In the original script, he just “shows up” with no explanation.
I'll be having a lot more time in the next few weeks for this.
simonitro at 9:46PM, Nov. 28, 2007
Amazing page with great atmosphere... I'm enjoying this great comic this far!
Fitz at 2:18AM, Oct. 19, 2007
The diary seems to further the image of Gurn that you've built up - that of a romantic soul. Good idea, much better than thought balloons. Also, great job on the tree, turned out really nice. And the fruit gave me an idea for a little story I might try drawing/writing someday.
antcomics at 1:58PM, Oct. 9, 2007
Very cool page.
FAL at 2:46PM, June 6, 2007
Really great concept! The chacacters that appeared so far are great, I love the monster. The underdog story never gets old, you got me hooked.