hahaha I see what you did there! I loved this story, specially because it was told from someone that was actually in it. I can totally relate to the protagonist since I've taken care of really old people. I went back and checked the previous pages where "a cat" opened the door and let them come inside. Nicely done!
skyangel at 3:59PM, Jan. 17, 2024
Oooooooooh creepy! XD
Locoma at 9:44AM, Dec. 31, 2023
hahaha I see what you did there! I loved this story, specially because it was told from someone that was actually in it. I can totally relate to the protagonist since I've taken care of really old people. I went back and checked the previous pages where "a cat" opened the door and let them come inside. Nicely done!
usedbooks at 9:49AM, Dec. 31, 2023
I'm glad you liked it! I like experimenting with point-of-view in short stories.
plymayer at 3:50PM, Dec. 11, 2023
Aaaaaa.......
PaulEberhardt at 1:10PM, Dec. 10, 2023
This looks lovely.
usedbooks at 3:46PM, Dec. 10, 2023
Thanks!