whats his/her name because I have an idea for hedgehog named silence the hedgehog who can do that and enhance hearing some the slightest noice makes there head explode.
Edited Chapter 1 PT 3.
[img]http://www.drunkduck.com/Sonic_Advance_3____The_Untold_Story/gfx/EA.png [/img]
Added better text bubbles, edited the sprites, and added some things that can enhance your work.
@ Mini are you being sarcastic with the mrrealygood editing thing, its hard to tell and i think i got the text boxes down but if you really want to help pm me and i'll think about it
Your speechbubbles, make them plain white, it'll look a lot better! Also try to make the tails of the speech bubbles with the line tool, the current tails look really wobbbly.
I'll give you more advice when I see more pages. So I wish you luck on your spriting career!
Hmmmmm...there are a couple of things you're still doing wrong.
First off, work on your grammar. Use spell check to fix any mistakes. Grammar is a very important part in any comic, so it needs to be at its finest.
One more thing, you're mixing Genesis backgrounds with Advance sprites. That's a big no-no. It makes them clash, if you're gonna use Advance sprites use Advance backgrounds or if you're gonna use Genesis backgrounds then use Genesis sprites.
Still, there's one thing I like. It's the fact that you're willing to accept constructive criticism and are willing to improve.
sasuke of the leaf at 4:29PM, April 7, 2008
whats his/her name because I have an idea for hedgehog named silence the hedgehog who can do that and enhance hearing some the slightest noice makes there head explode.
Kaylo at 3:37PM, Dec. 19, 2007
yeah Dark link is right, your sprite character needs lots of shading
NightmareSyndrom at 4:21PM, Oct. 27, 2007
That's why your my editor! Can't you replace the previous one with you new one?
Zippo Prower at 3:57PM, Oct. 27, 2007
Edited Chapter 1 PT 3. [img]http://www.drunkduck.com/Sonic_Advance_3____The_Untold_Story/gfx/EA.png [/img] Added better text bubbles, edited the sprites, and added some things that can enhance your work.
NightmareSyndrom at 12:50PM, Oct. 23, 2007
@ Mini are you being sarcastic with the mrrealygood editing thing, its hard to tell and i think i got the text boxes down but if you really want to help pm me and i'll think about it
NightmareSyndrom at 8:51PM, Oct. 22, 2007
@Oblivion the only reason i'm using these backgrounds is because i couln't find any other backgrounds that would look like the inside of the deathegg
Arc at 7:19PM, Oct. 21, 2007
Your speechbubbles, make them plain white, it'll look a lot better! Also try to make the tails of the speech bubbles with the line tool, the current tails look really wobbbly. I'll give you more advice when I see more pages. So I wish you luck on your spriting career!
Oblivion_Awaits at 4:14PM, Oct. 21, 2007
Hmmmmm...there are a couple of things you're still doing wrong. First off, work on your grammar. Use spell check to fix any mistakes. Grammar is a very important part in any comic, so it needs to be at its finest. One more thing, you're mixing Genesis backgrounds with Advance sprites. That's a big no-no. It makes them clash, if you're gonna use Advance sprites use Advance backgrounds or if you're gonna use Genesis backgrounds then use Genesis sprites. Still, there's one thing I like. It's the fact that you're willing to accept constructive criticism and are willing to improve.
dark link at 7:27AM, Oct. 21, 2007
Hmm...the shading needs a lot of work... tell you what. I'll make a sheet for you, okay? I just need the effects that you used.