Ch. 1 pg. 4
Peophin on Dec. 10, 2006
Page 4 up! I'm gonna try to do a Monday/Wednesday/Friday update schedule. o-o
Here is where it gets interesting. The plot finally gets somewhere…. XD I had fun with Edward's hair in the last panel.
Emerald Dreaming
Luminous at 9:06PM, Dec. 11, 2006
I like your art style, especially the way you draw eyes ^^. This looks interesting so far. My only suggestion would be to think about inking it or going over it a second time in hard pencil, like it looks like you did with the eyes, because it's a bit light in places. But either way, good job ^^.