Ooops, She forgot.
Aurora Moon on Dec. 29, 2006
I just got word from my teacher that even though I didn't get at least 10 pages done he dediced to give me a good grade anyway! mainly because on the fact that I was appertly the only one who seemed to take him seriously, snice the other students only did an halfway done page or did nothing at all!
woo!! ^_^
and now that's over with, guess what that means? Yes, I get to color this thing on my photoshop at last! I think it looks much better now don't you think?
although… this one page of Janice battling the muntant bee looks nothing like her.. :( her face is supposed to be a little bit longer, if you know what I mean. Janice's unique faical features is that she has a quite oval head, and as an result she has a somewhat “long” face as an result. long nose too. if you go back the last pages to look at her face you'll notice that.
Little Swan at 4:23AM, Aug. 31, 2009
It does look a lot better, and neater too (although not being neater isn't necessarily a bad thing). The shadows on her face and neck are good. I'm glad you got a good grade too :) Oooer... sounds like a bad thing to forget!
TheMidge28 at 12:36PM, Aug. 3, 2007
Wow...what a big difference from last pages. I regret stating anything on the colort pencils. This looks beautiful!
Ozoneocean at 9:12AM, Dec. 30, 2006
-heh, my post there is [i]full[/i] of spelling mistakes! ^_^
Ozoneocean at 9:11AM, Dec. 30, 2006
Yep, this page looks great Aurora, really well done with your work on this one! I love this new more realistic style of your's and the clouring brings it up to a whole new level. One thing though, not related to the art, you use of "an" isn't always correct. You should only use "an" when the word after it either starts with a vowel (a,e,i,o,u), and sometimes for words starting with "H". For all the rest you should just use "a". For example: "a couch". But you'd use "an" for this: "an orange". The only "H" words you'd use it for are words with French origins like "honour", as in: "it's an [i]honour[/i] to meet you"... I hope I wasn't being intrusive in suggesting that, I just want to be helpful there.
Crazy Dutchman at 5:05AM, Dec. 30, 2006
Yes, nice coloring
marine at 1:03AM, Dec. 30, 2006
It does look much better then the previous pages.