SympleSymon at 6:45PM, Dec. 19, 2007

I'm loving the FX...where'd you get them?

Nepath at 12:49PM, Aug. 29, 2007

Some thanks... @ozoneocean/literacysuks1 Thanks for your respective comments, always appreciated. As for Misty (pink haired girl), theres good news and bad news. The bad news is that she will not re-appear until Part 2, but the good news is that not only does Part 2 start in 5 pages time but as of then she will have a much more prominent role to the story. This story is not ongoing, it has a definitive beginning, middle and end, so this first part is intended to mainly introduce Energize and what he can do as well as set up the plot. Misty appears as a kind of teaser. @ Abt_Nihil: Thanks. I played around with some different ways for him to get them out and the end result was the one you see here. Im pretty pleased with how this came out. @doomedd44: Thanks for the comments. I feel I have pretty much got the hang of the whole explosion thing now, it’s nice to hear that someone else likes them too!! @ Dchao: Im glad you like that aspect of his power, it’s difficult deciding how to represent his speed each time around. @ Fitz: Thanks for the appreciation. Im actually a big fan of McFarlane’s run on Spider-man and I like most of the dark tone comics that are about, but I was always a DC Comics fan and they had the true heroes in my opinion, and I want Energize to fit that tone. I always like to read your comments though, they give me some nice ideas for future pages. @TheMidge28, RapidoBlue, Matalicman, QSAMA, monster friend, Stevesan, man in black, RabbitMaster: Thanks for the comments

QSAMA at 5:07PM, Aug. 28, 2007

that last panel is tight!

monsterfriend at 4:38AM, Aug. 27, 2007

awesome

Ozoneocean at 8:50PM, Aug. 25, 2007

Oh I remember now... Tehe ^^ That last panel is groovy! Just waiting for the pink haired gal to show up again ^^

Ozoneocean at 8:48PM, Aug. 25, 2007

Pretty cool looking drawing style. I wonder who start the fire though?

literacysuks1 at 11:16AM, Aug. 25, 2007

In the last panel I'd have to agree with the person that says his right fist (my right) looks off and I think his face in that panel looks a bit skewed but the page is still good. As for writing so far it's great and captures that classic superhero feel without seeming derivative of those stories. Though I wouldn't mind getting away from the superhero stuff to figure out what the heck is up with that pink haired girl : P

Abt_Nihil at 7:24AM, Aug. 25, 2007

Great Scott! The last panel is gorgeous... you can really feel the gravity on the three characters.

RabbitMaster at 12:04PM, Aug. 24, 2007

very well done. I wondered if the lady was gonna make it out.

doomedd44 at 8:17PM, Aug. 23, 2007

i must say, the explosion here looks more real than the one on several tv shows (law & order, NCIS,,, all those ones)

doomedd44 at 8:16PM, Aug. 23, 2007

EXPLOSION!!!

Dchao at 3:17PM, Aug. 23, 2007

so cool how fast he is xD

Fitz at 3:16PM, Aug. 23, 2007

OK, this page's just beautiful, everything's just right. The explosion is exactly the kind of effect I was talking about last time about the clouds - clear and present danger. You can almost see the flames moving. And referring back to what you said last time - maybe it's just me, but I think the general idyllic feel that you're aiming at should not "soften" the atmosphere in times of great danger. It should emphasize it - meaning, make it even more striking when something bad happens. I do understand, though, that it's your homage to classic comics. The one that comes to mind instantly is the early 80's Spider-Man, think John Romita Sr. That one was very "glossy", I think. Compare that with McFarlane's later experiments, especially the long story about Lizard.

TheMidge28 at 2:12PM, Aug. 23, 2007

nice dynamic page...the fist is a little wonky in the last frame but the balance of color and the frames makes overall the page to say Ka-Boom!!!

RapidoBlue at 2:02PM, Aug. 23, 2007

last pannel is AWESOME

Matalicman at 1:50PM, Aug. 23, 2007

NICE STUFF!!!