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Page 24 done and only ONE MORE PAGE until the end of Part 1. Then i will be exactly 25% through this story. The cover to Part 2 should look pretty cool too as it will feature some great guest art from a friend of mine who is not on the site and Abt_Nihil of AD1997/Signifikat!!
A really nice page! Very... cinematic. I love the first three panels for how one second he's just dozing off, the next he's out door (or window, actually) saving the world again. The little box saying danger seems a bit redundant, though, his wide open eye with a yellow retina speaks for itself, really. The city at night looks nice, I like the layout in this panel, everything's just right. Now, I'm off to page 25 :)
Some thanks...
@jmt:
Thatââ¬â¢s right, heââ¬â¢s a regular nut job! There are reasons for his obsessionsââ¬Â¦more to come.
@Inlad:
Thanks for the comments. What good hero hasnââ¬â¢t got some sort of danger sense nowadays huh?
@Abt_Nihil:
Thanks. Yes this is leading to the end of Part 1.
@TheMidge28:
I know what you mean, when inking that last panel I lost my way on something, but couldnââ¬â¢t put my finger on it. It took me about an hour to muster the motivation to finish it and I still wasnââ¬â¢t comfortable about. I liked Panel 1 though.
@literacysuks1:
Thereââ¬â¢s always one!! Only joking, I appreciate your comments. I will make an effort to do more background work from now on, but when I have time constraints manipulating photoââ¬â¢s allows me to get a page out.
@Dchao:
Thanks for the continued support.
@man in black, lurch9944, DAJB, Monkey Mafia:
Thanks for the comments
OOOOOOH, Danger sense!!!! SWEET!
plus. . .I WAS RIGHT!!!! SWEETNESS!!!!
And I still can't find anything wrong with the page, good work.
Inlad The Dashing Paladin.
All the panels click...except the last one... maybe the perspective?...maybe the way its inked?...I can't put my finger on it...The page over all is great for storytelling...love it...our hero is so torn inside...can't wait to dive into that inner struggle.
SympleSymon at 6:49PM, Dec. 19, 2007
Energize is gonna go and smack some sense into that wayward train, I bet!
Fitz at 11:15PM, Sept. 10, 2007
A really nice page! Very... cinematic. I love the first three panels for how one second he's just dozing off, the next he's out door (or window, actually) saving the world again. The little box saying danger seems a bit redundant, though, his wide open eye with a yellow retina speaks for itself, really. The city at night looks nice, I like the layout in this panel, everything's just right. Now, I'm off to page 25 :)
Nepath at 4:31PM, Sept. 8, 2007
Some thanks... @jmt: Thatââ¬â¢s right, heââ¬â¢s a regular nut job! There are reasons for his obsessionsââ¬Â¦more to come. @Inlad: Thanks for the comments. What good hero hasnââ¬â¢t got some sort of danger sense nowadays huh? @Abt_Nihil: Thanks. Yes this is leading to the end of Part 1. @TheMidge28: I know what you mean, when inking that last panel I lost my way on something, but couldnââ¬â¢t put my finger on it. It took me about an hour to muster the motivation to finish it and I still wasnââ¬â¢t comfortable about. I liked Panel 1 though. @literacysuks1: Thereââ¬â¢s always one!! Only joking, I appreciate your comments. I will make an effort to do more background work from now on, but when I have time constraints manipulating photoââ¬â¢s allows me to get a page out. @Dchao: Thanks for the continued support. @man in black, lurch9944, DAJB, Monkey Mafia: Thanks for the comments
jmt at 8:23PM, Sept. 7, 2007
Seems like our hero might be a bit obsesive about... well, being a hero.
lurch9944 at 4:30PM, Sept. 7, 2007
Nice page.
lurch9944 at 4:30PM, Sept. 7, 2007
Nice page.
anonymous at 4:30PM, Sept. 7, 2007
Nice page.
Inlad at 1:12PM, Sept. 7, 2007
OOOOOOH, Danger sense!!!! SWEET! plus. . .I WAS RIGHT!!!! SWEETNESS!!!! And I still can't find anything wrong with the page, good work. Inlad The Dashing Paladin.
Abt_Nihil at 6:53AM, Sept. 7, 2007
Great pacing... leading up to a cliffhanger I guess?
DAJB at 11:39PM, Sept. 6, 2007
Lucky that Spidey sense still tingles or who knows how long he might have over-slept! Nice work again.
TheMidge28 at 6:59PM, Sept. 6, 2007
All the panels click...except the last one... maybe the perspective?...maybe the way its inked?...I can't put my finger on it...The page over all is great for storytelling...love it...our hero is so torn inside...can't wait to dive into that inner struggle.
literacysuks1 at 4:46PM, Sept. 6, 2007
Great page, I really wish you'd draw the city though. I may be in the minority but I find the photo manipulation skyscrapers kinda distracting.
MonkeyMafia at 4:31PM, Sept. 6, 2007
Sweet page!
Dchao at 3:55PM, Sept. 6, 2007
D: Like the real city background there.. it fits.