RabbitMaster at 8:11AM, Sept. 18, 2007

I love the crumpled metal effect

Nepath at 5:48PM, Sept. 15, 2007

Some thanks... @Fitz: Thanks Fitz, that is one of my favourite Spider-man stories also and partly inspired the opening scene of this comic. I always loved how Lizard gave Spidey a real kick in, so it prompted me to start the book with Energize having lost already… @jmt: Very true, I just hope I can do these types of scenes justice. @Inlad: Yes, tough times ahead for Energize. @TheMidge28: Thanks for the praise, he has a lot further to fall yet… @DAJB: Thanks for the support @Rockster1039, literacysuks1, man in black, Abt_Nihil: Thanks for your comments

Rockster1039 at 6:01PM, Sept. 14, 2007

fav'd

Fitz at 10:55AM, Sept. 14, 2007

Some depth can't harm a story :) I remember my favorite Spider-Man comic being McFarlane's dark, epic story about him and Lizard. Not much action - and AWESOME atmosphere. I like this page. I like it how at first the train looks like a red and blue superhero cloak.

jmt at 4:46AM, Sept. 13, 2007

I think keeping your pace fluid in a comic is a good idea. It give the reader time to adjust and think between the actiony times.

Abt_Nihil at 7:47AM, Sept. 12, 2007

I agree, deep stories are what I enjoy most.

Inlad at 5:21PM, Sept. 11, 2007

that had too hurt. . .a lot, like being hit by a train. . . Inlad The Dashing Paladin. ( who does not envy Energize at this momment)

TheMidge28 at 2:20PM, Sept. 11, 2007

GREAT PAGE! I love this so dramatic and our hero so fallen...go where the story goes...I am on board for the ride!

DAJB at 1:17PM, Sept. 11, 2007

Don't worry about changing pace - go with the deepening story. I like deep!