Second installment of the second installment…and finally the return of Misty. She was introduced in Part 1 but never expanded upon. She will feature much more prominently in this Part and you will learn what her connection is to our hero.
I hope you enjoy and as always any previous comments have been responded to.
Interesting theories. Im obviously not going to say if any of it is right or wrong, but it's good to hear your thoughts. If you have anymore as the story progresses, let me know.
Okay, here goes. I think the shadowed man in Saroth and they are somehow tapping into his powers and making the public hate him, as Misty in the beginning of Issue 1 says people were so quick to betray him. I have that bit planned out, but that thing Saroth zapped Energize with in issue 1 I don't know...yet :D
Some thanksââ¬Â¦
@ironhand:
Thanks for the comments, I was happy with the final panel as well. Im curious what your take on the story is though and encourage you to post it, at the very least the others can compare your ideas with any they might have themselvesââ¬Â¦personally I would be very surprised if you got it, I donââ¬â¢t think I have given enough away yet.
@Fitz:
Itââ¬â¢s good to finally introduce Misty as an element to the book rather than just the odd appearance.
@Dchao:
Thanks for coming back to comment on this one.
@Abt_Nihil:
Thanks, Energize mood is different than it was in Part 1 as he now has the realisation that someone is out to get himââ¬Â¦
@Inlad:
Yes she used his real name, but she did that in Part 1 too. Also, there is a reason for all the pink, but that is yet to comeââ¬Â¦
@TheMidge28:
Thanks for the comments, im glad you noticed the change in layout style. Before I would either do a splash page or cram as many panels as possible on 1 pageââ¬Â¦Now I am making each page have a few panels for storyline progression and a main image for looks. As for the identity thing, you will find out how she knows by the end of this Partââ¬Â¦but you kind of know how alreadyââ¬Â¦.
@literacysuks1:
Keep reading to find outââ¬Â¦Hah!
Thanks for the comments.
@Rockster1039, doomedd44, MonkeyMafia, DAJB, Matalicman, QSAMA:
Thanks for your comments
Very good. I already have one idea of what the storyline is {and think its right} but I won't share it as I may make a fool of myself and it turns out wrong and 2 I don't want to spoil it for others. Anyway, very good page here, love the Misty/Energize panel.
I just remembered an odd thing: I read the page when he hit the train on 9/11... Nice to see the girl again, curious to see what her part in the story is. Nice Gaussians, btw. They look just right. And it's awesome that you read that Spider-Man story, too. That was loooong ago, didn't think I'd actually meet someone who remembers those. I was a kid back then - and at that time the story creeped the HELL out of me!
D: I missed a lot of updates.. kinda bad because I haven't got to comment (ace pages btw) but it was nice to read a load of pages instead of one ^^ keep it up!
This girl really likes pink; pink hair, pink eyes, and pink lips to! I really like the way u have drawn her.
And I believe she just said Energize's real name!!!!
Inlad The Dashing Paladin. (who wishes this damn rater thingy would go to 10 for this comic!!!)
Wait, how'd she get to him so quickly? Or first for that matter. Though I know you'll say "keep reading to find out!" so maybe I shouldn't be asking : P.
SympleSymon at 9:14AM, Dec. 20, 2007
Looking good!
Nepath at 6:17AM, Sept. 22, 2007
Interesting theories. Im obviously not going to say if any of it is right or wrong, but it's good to hear your thoughts. If you have anymore as the story progresses, let me know.
ironhand at 7:48AM, Sept. 21, 2007
Okay, here goes. I think the shadowed man in Saroth and they are somehow tapping into his powers and making the public hate him, as Misty in the beginning of Issue 1 says people were so quick to betray him. I have that bit planned out, but that thing Saroth zapped Energize with in issue 1 I don't know...yet :D
Nepath at 4:24AM, Sept. 21, 2007
Some thanksââ¬Â¦ @ironhand: Thanks for the comments, I was happy with the final panel as well. Im curious what your take on the story is though and encourage you to post it, at the very least the others can compare your ideas with any they might have themselvesââ¬Â¦personally I would be very surprised if you got it, I donââ¬â¢t think I have given enough away yet. @Fitz: Itââ¬â¢s good to finally introduce Misty as an element to the book rather than just the odd appearance. @Dchao: Thanks for coming back to comment on this one. @Abt_Nihil: Thanks, Energize mood is different than it was in Part 1 as he now has the realisation that someone is out to get himââ¬Â¦ @Inlad: Yes she used his real name, but she did that in Part 1 too. Also, there is a reason for all the pink, but that is yet to comeââ¬Â¦ @TheMidge28: Thanks for the comments, im glad you noticed the change in layout style. Before I would either do a splash page or cram as many panels as possible on 1 pageââ¬Â¦Now I am making each page have a few panels for storyline progression and a main image for looks. As for the identity thing, you will find out how she knows by the end of this Partââ¬Â¦but you kind of know how alreadyââ¬Â¦. @literacysuks1: Keep reading to find outââ¬Â¦Hah! Thanks for the comments. @Rockster1039, doomedd44, MonkeyMafia, DAJB, Matalicman, QSAMA: Thanks for your comments
ironhand at 1:20PM, Sept. 20, 2007
Very good. I already have one idea of what the storyline is {and think its right} but I won't share it as I may make a fool of myself and it turns out wrong and 2 I don't want to spoil it for others. Anyway, very good page here, love the Misty/Energize panel.
Fitz at 12:43PM, Sept. 18, 2007
I just remembered an odd thing: I read the page when he hit the train on 9/11... Nice to see the girl again, curious to see what her part in the story is. Nice Gaussians, btw. They look just right. And it's awesome that you read that Spider-Man story, too. That was loooong ago, didn't think I'd actually meet someone who remembers those. I was a kid back then - and at that time the story creeped the HELL out of me!
Dchao at 12:59PM, Sept. 17, 2007
D: I missed a lot of updates.. kinda bad because I haven't got to comment (ace pages btw) but it was nice to read a load of pages instead of one ^^ keep it up!
MonkeyMafia at 11:32AM, Sept. 17, 2007
Sweet last panel! (And everything else).
Abt_Nihil at 6:11AM, Sept. 16, 2007
Their expressions are playing off each other nicely... and I like Energize grim ^^ Great page!
DAJB at 1:07AM, Sept. 16, 2007
She peeked! She peeked! Nice work again.
Matalicman at 12:40AM, Sept. 16, 2007
great stuff!!
Inlad at 9:13PM, Sept. 15, 2007
This girl really likes pink; pink hair, pink eyes, and pink lips to! I really like the way u have drawn her. And I believe she just said Energize's real name!!!! Inlad The Dashing Paladin. (who wishes this damn rater thingy would go to 10 for this comic!!!)
TheMidge28 at 6:55PM, Sept. 15, 2007
the layout on this page rocks! you have truely evolved from the earlier layouts! great page! how does she know? We will soon find out!
QSAMA at 5:58PM, Sept. 15, 2007
yayyyy more pink haired girl!!! this page is freakin huge man!! lol
literacysuks1 at 5:57PM, Sept. 15, 2007
Wait, how'd she get to him so quickly? Or first for that matter. Though I know you'll say "keep reading to find out!" so maybe I shouldn't be asking : P.