Energize 2 - Page 10

Nepath on Nov. 30, 2007

Energize #2 - Page 10

Latest update and as always all previous comments have been responded to.

This page is a transition from the scene before and the scene that starts on the next page. The scene coming up will be text intensive again but you will learn a lot about what is going on so hopefully it will be something to look forward to…

Thanks for continuing to read and I hope you continue to enjoy.

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SympleSymon at 9:27AM, Dec. 20, 2007

I'm going with themidge's prediction - it's the centurion/spartan from the beginning! Great intro, whoever it is!

Nepath at 1:48PM, Dec. 6, 2007

Some thanks... @Abt_Nihil: I suppose thatÃ¢â¬â¢s a good thing that this is an unexpected turn. This guy is no shape shifter, just your standard human looking alien as they seem to be in most things, but who knows, maybe there are some less human aliens to comeÃ¢â¬Â¦ Thanks for your comments, they are always appreciated! @Dchao: My pleasureÃ¢â¬Â¦ @ trevoramueller: Hey, maybe you already haveÃ¢â¬Â¦ @ Scorpious: Thanks very much! Also, thanks for coming to read Energize. @ DAJB: Add to that mysteriously fading power and I would say he is well and truly fuÃ¢â¬Â¦screwed? @ Matalicman: Thanks! @ TheMidge28: Now for that, you will have to wait and see. Thanks! @ Fitz: Thanks! I was happy with the shading on the cloak myself. As for the Ã¢â¬ÅpatienceÃ¢â¬Â line, I threw that in at the last minute. In my original script I had him silent the whole time, but then I thought Ã¢â¬Åhe needs to say somethingÃ¢â¬Â. Im glad you liked it! @ Argent_Nightmare: Thanks!

Abt_Nihil at 3:41AM, Dec. 6, 2007

I'm still quite surprised there are aliens involved in this... this one does look human though... or it's a shapeshifter :D Sexy assistant & red hood: The coolness factor is rising rapidly.

Dchao at 10:36AM, Dec. 5, 2007

D: hawt legs

trevoramueller at 1:09PM, Dec. 4, 2007

I can't wait to see this guy get into a good scrape with our hero.

Scorpious at 9:36PM, Dec. 3, 2007

i love the villian that red hood does jump to the eyes exelent work

DAJB at 2:53AM, Dec. 2, 2007

Classic red-caped villain and an evil tycoon with a sexy assistant. Energize is going to have his work cut out!

Matalicman at 7:45PM, Dec. 1, 2007

nice

TheMidge28 at 4:47PM, Dec. 1, 2007

so is this the centurion from the beginning? very dramitc scene and menacing! Looks great!

Fitz at 10:16AM, Dec. 1, 2007

Oooh this is NICE! The cloaked figure looks awesome, great colors and REALLY nice shading. And the line "My patience is wearing thin, human" - ME LIKE! Good stuff! Hope to see more soon, now that I relieved you of some duties ;)

Argent_Nightmare at 9:40AM, Dec. 1, 2007

Ooooh... Red, mysterious figure... I love it! xD