Energize 2 - Page 16

Nepath on Dec. 22, 2007

Energize #2 - Page 16

Latest update and your comments for the previous page have all been responded to.

Just a quick note to IRONHAND: I know you did not receive the sketch and I did respond to your comments but for some reason I am unable to send you the PQ - sorry. Your comments were appreciated though.

There is only one more page of dialogue (hopefully it is revealing some stuff for you though) after then the action will pick up a little.

I hope you enjoy the page…oh…and MERRY CHRISTMAS!!

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Fitz at 1:04AM, Jan. 28, 2008

And so the plot thickens... Dun-dun-DUN! I' think the artifact might be the guy in the red cloak - reasoning that he's not human. Hm... Anyway...! Rrreally well done! The way he sneaks up to Energize makes me think of Montgomery Burns - and I can almost hear him talking the same way.

Nepath at 1:33PM, Jan. 1, 2008

Some thanks... @Inlad: Thanks! Hopefully it will get better! @trevoramueller: We get to hear the origin through conversation but rest assured a flashback sequence will show the event that created EnergizeÃ¢â¬Â¦but not yet! @Abt_Nihil: Thanks. I find scenes like these difficult to visualize, and as these are the sort of scenes that you have mastered in AD I take that as a great compliment. @DAJB: Thanks! More to come! @TheMidge28: Thanks! I wasnÃ¢â¬â¢t sure if that would look like a lazy move, but it seemed to workout okay. @man in black: Thanks @D0m: Nothing worse than someone knowing everything about youÃ¢â¬Â¦ @Matalicman: Thanks! @Carbajal3000: Thank you very much! @QSAMA: Oh yesÃ¢â¬Â¦more to come!

Inlad at 3:57PM, Dec. 27, 2007

ohhhhhhh, This be most cool!!! Inlad The Dashing Paladin.

trevoramueller at 12:32PM, Dec. 24, 2007

A little origin story here, very nice. The more we understand this character, the better - not only how he became a super hero, but why. Happy holiday and merry new year to you too, my friend!

Abt_Nihil at 3:49AM, Dec. 24, 2007

Fantastic page, the plot revelations and the way you "direct" the two guys -- brilliant. Love how he's sneaking around Energize, while the latter turns away.